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The Best Things to Include In an Email Subject Line to Get a Response

Business

Reaching out with an email could be a magic ticket into a stranger's life that could lead to networking, potential opportunities, and even just simple brand recognition.


But if you stop and think about how many emails each of us gets every single day, it's enough to make you roll your eyes at the idea of believing in the power of a single email sent to a person.

While you may spend hours figuring out exactly what to say inside the email, when to place "the ask" and how many things you should link out to, the most important part is not always what is inside, it's the subject line.

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If you're looking to get a response or a person to read your email, here are the four best things to include in the subject line so that they feel empowered and excited to open what you sent to their inbox.

1. Get Personal

We all enjoy personalized communication and really do not enjoy mass, generic emails. If someone receives an email from you and isn't familiar with your email address, you should make the subject line friendly and personal so they know you're a real human and that you do not belong in their spam folder.

Consider including their name in the subject line, starting it like this:

"Hi Jen - "

Another personal technique you can use is to skip out on including the details of what the email contains and why you are reaching out in the subject line and instead put in a personal detail that you know about them.

For example, if you are sending an email about a new product that you'd like them to know about and you know from their Instagram feed, their website, and comments they have made in the past online, that they love pizza, perhaps you'd make the subject line about that personal fact rather than about the product or the question you are trying to ask them.

Then, start the email off introducing yourself, taking about that fact, and then getting to the point. Doing that builds rapport with them and shows that you took the time to get to know them rather than just finding their email address and hitting them up for something you want or need.

2. Be Extra Catchy

Ask a question, pull from emotion, take the topic of your email and sum it up in a short sentence so they get an idea of what's inside. The catchier the better. It makes people curios and eager to know what is inside.

Don't open this email unless you have nothing else to do tonight.

It was catchy, engaging, and hit me at the right time. I was bored at my desk and it made me want to open it to see what was inside the email.

3. Include the Why

If you want to skip out on being too gimmicky by using a personal fact about the person or something that's going to pull them in, then get to the point. If you include a direct reason why you are sending the email in the subject line, it usually can evoke a person to hit open, skim the email, and respond. Perhaps you use a subject line like this:

"Hi Jen - Reaching Out With Free August Event Tickets"

"Hi Jen - From One Female Badass to Another: Coffee?"

"Hi Jen - Let's Swap Stories on Failure: Coffee?"

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4. Add a Compelling Event

If your email is connected to a compelling or time-sensitive event or piece of news, be sure to include that in the subject line. When we stop to think about how many emails we get a day, we might browse the subject line, delete the spam ones, and keep the ones that seem interesting inside our inbox, unopened, for days, weeks, even years.

Including a punchy and current detail may get someone to open your correspondence faster.

Here’s an example:

“Hi Jen – Series A Inventor Deadline for ____ Is Monday”

That way, if the person on the other end is interested in connecting with you or responding to you, they know there is immediacy attached to the email and could find themselves opening and responding faster.

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Do 2020 Presidential Candidates Still Have Rules to Play By?

Not too many years ago, my advice to political candidates would have been pretty simple: "Don't do or say anything stupid." But the last few elections have rendered that advice outdated.


When Barack Obama referred to his grandmother as a "typical white woman" during the 2008 campaign, for example, many people thought it would cost him the election -- and once upon a time, it probably would have. But his supporters were focused on the values and positions he professed, and they weren't going to let one unwise comment distract them. Candidate Obama didn't even get much pushback for saying, "We're five days away from fundamentally transforming the United States of America." That statement should have given even his most ardent supporters pause, but it didn't. It was in line with everything Obama had previously said, and it was what his supporters wanted to hear.

2016: What rules?

Fast forward to 2016, and Donald Trump didn't just ignore traditional norms, he almost seemed to relish violating them. Who would have ever dreamed we'd elect a man who talked openly about grabbing women by the **** and who was constantly blasting out crazy-sounding Tweets? But Trump did get elected. Why? Some people believe it was because Americans finally felt like they had permission to show their bigotry. Others think Obama had pushed things so far to the left that right-wing voters were more interested in dragging public policy back toward the middle than in what Trump was Tweeting.

Another theory is that Trump's lewd, crude, and socially unacceptable behavior was deliberately designed to make Democrats feel comfortable campaigning on policies that were far further to the left than they ever would have attempted before. Why? Because they were sure America would never elect someone who acted like Trump. If that theory is right, and Democrats took the bait, Trump's "digital policies" served him well.

And although Trump's brash style drew the most handlines, he wasn't the only one who seemed to have forgotten the, "Don't do or say anything stupid," rule. Hillary Clinton also made news when she made a "basket of deplorables" comment at a private fundraiser, but it leaked out, and it dogged her for the rest of the election cycle.

And that's where we need to start our discussion. Now that all the old rules about candidate behavior have been blown away, do presidential candidates even need digital policies?

Yes, they do. More than ever, in my opinion. Let me tell you why.

Digital policies for 2020 and beyond

While the 2016 election tossed traditional rules about political campaigns to the trash heap, that doesn't mean you can do anything you want. Even if it's just for the sake of consistency, candidates need digital policies for their own campaigns, regardless of what anybody else is doing. Here are some important things to consider.

Align your digital policies with your campaign strategy

Aside from all the accompanying bells and whistles, why do you want to be president? What ideological beliefs are driving you? If you were to become president, what would you want your legacy to be? Once you've answered those questions honestly, you can develop your campaign strategy. Only then can you develop digital policies that are in alignment with the overall purpose -- the "Why?" -- of your campaign:

  • If part of your campaign strategy, for example, is to position yourself as someone who's above the fray of the nastiness of modern politics, then one of your digital policies should be that your campaign will never post or share anything that attacks another candidate on a personal level. Attacks will be targeted only at the policy level.
  • While it's not something I would recommend, if your campaign strategy is to depict the other side as "deplorables," then one of your digital policies should be to post and share every post, meme, image, etc. that supports your claim.
  • If a central piece of your platform is that detaining would-be refugees at the border is inhumane, then your digital policies should state that you will never say, post, or share anything that contradicts that belief, even if Trump plans to relocate some of them to your own city. Complaining that such a move would put too big a strain on local resources -- even if true -- would be making an argument for the other side. Don't do it.
  • Don't be too quick to share posts or Tweets from supporters. If it's a text post, read all of it to make sure there's not something in there that would reflect negatively on you. And examine images closely to make sure there's not a small detail that someone may notice.
  • Decide what your campaign's voice and tone will be. When you send out emails asking for donations, will you address the recipient as "friend" and stress the urgency of donating so you can continue to fight for them? Or will you personalize each email and use a more low-key, collaborative approach?

Those are just a few examples. The takeaway is that your online behavior should always support your campaign strategy. While you could probably get away with posting or sharing something that seems mean or "unpresidential," posting something that contradicts who you say you are could be deadly to your campaign. Trust me on this -- if there are inconsistencies, Twitter will find them and broadcast them to the world. And you'll have to waste valuable time, resources, and public trust to explain those inconsistencies away.

Remember that the most common-sense digital policies still apply

The 2016 election didn't abolish all of the rules. Some still apply and should definitely be included in your digital policies:

  1. Claim every domain you can think of that a supporter might type into a search engine. Jeb Bush not claiming www.jebbush.com (the official campaign domain was www.jeb2016.com) was a rookie mistake, and he deserved to have his supporters redirected to Trump's site.
  2. Choose your campaign's Twitter handle wisely. It should be obvious, not clever or cutesy. In addition, consider creating accounts with possible variations of the Twitter handle you chose so that no one else can use them.
  3. Give the same care to selecting hashtags. When considering a hashtag, conduct a search to understand its current use -- it might not be what you think! When making up new hashtags, try to avoid anything that could be hijacked for a different purpose -- one that might end up embarrassing you.
  4. Make sure that anyone authorized to Tweet, post, etc., on your behalf has a copy of your digital policies and understands the reasons behind them. (People are more likely to follow a rule if they understand why it's important.)
  5. Decide what you'll do if you make an online faux pas that starts a firestorm. What's your emergency plan?
  6. Consider sending an email to supporters who sign up on your website, thanking them for their support and suggesting ways (based on digital policies) they can help your messaging efforts. If you let them know how they can best help you, most should be happy to comply. It's a small ask that could prevent you from having to publicly disavow an ardent supporter.
  7. Make sure you're compliant with all applicable regulations: campaign finance, accessibility, privacy, etc. Adopt a double opt-in policy, so that users who sign up for your newsletter or email list through your website have to confirm by clicking on a link in an email. (And make sure your email template provides an easy way for people to unsubscribe.)
  8. Few people thought 2016 would end the way it did. And there's no way to predict quite yet what forces will shape the 2020 election. Careful tracking of your messaging (likes, shares, comments, etc.) will tell you if you're on track or if public opinion has shifted yet again. If so, your messaging needs to shift with it. Ideally, one person should be responsible for monitoring reaction to the campaign's messaging and for raising a red flag if reactions aren't what was expected.

Thankfully, the world hasn't completely lost its marbles

Whatever the outcome of the election may be, candidates now face a situation where long-standing rules of behavior no longer apply. You now have to make your own rules -- your own digital policies. You can't make assumptions about what the voting public will or won't accept. You can't assume that "They'll never vote for someone who acts like that"; neither can you assume, "Oh, I can get away with that, too." So do it right from the beginning. Because in this election, I predict that sound digital policies combined with authenticity will be your best friend.